I guess I should tell you a little bit about myself. I am a spy for the United States of America. My parents knew I has a gift from a young age. When I was 12 I memorized the codes to all my neighbor's garages on the street. I watched them enter codes every morning while I walked the dog until they were hardwired into my brain. I used to play games with myself, like whenever i went to the grocery store I would try to figure out which cars in the parking lot had moved while i was in the store. I can run a 4.6 second 40 yard dash. I can hold my breath underwater for 3 minutes. I have a black belt in 4 forms of karate. I can kill you with a pair of chopsticks, If you get on my bad side, I am your worst nightmare.
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I like how it starts out threatening the reader, it makes you intrigued to know who this person is. There are a few grammatical mistakes, such as in the second sentence of the second paragraph the has should be had and some of the I's are not capitalized. You are able to see some of the person's personality in the fact that they memorized the garage codes, but besides that you don't see if they are funny, nice, always angry, etc. I am excited for the next blog when we will get to see more of the character.
ReplyDeleteNice Work. I am interested to hear more about you and your work Frank. I want to hear how many people you have killed, and in what styles or using what weapons. You went to the grocery store when you were young? Was there a absence of responsible parenting in your life? Tell us more
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